Thursday, May 7, 2015

Cannibalistic Poetry (South AND Central)

Eating Poetry

BY MARK STRAND
Ink runs from the corners of my mouth.
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.

The librarian does not believe what she sees.
Her eyes are sad
and she walks with her hands in her dress.

The poems are gone.
The light is dim.
The dogs are on the basement stairs and coming up.

Their eyeballs roll,
their blond legs burn like brush.
The poor librarian begins to stamp her feet and weep.

She does not understand.
When I get on my knees and lick her hand,
she screams.

I am a new man.
I snarl at her and bark.
I romp with joy in the bookish dark.




Cannibalize this blog. Cannibalize the words, verses and prose. Cut them up, eat them, and
make them your own. Make new from the old, original born from originality. 

Your assignment is to scour the blog, dissecting PHRASES (3+ words) from ANY post
(South OR Central), response, or reply, and assemble them in an aesthetic way to create a
new poem. Write the poem in a word document, save the document, and then copy/paste 
your cannibalized poem below. 

Happy eating. 

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  2. yo, so like i got this. Im thinking about another, you know? i added some question marks (shoot me, i know) but thats why i was thinking about a V2. Peace out and re elect Bill Clinton
    -Ryan


    What would you constitute as a masterpiece?
    A magnificent rainbow?
    A tropical beach?
    A beautiful sunset?
    The world around us?
    Does it come from within?
    Is It real?
    Something better? Something different?
    everyone daydreams time to time
    is it because we are slaves to the clock?
    i would love to break the barrier
    to do something
    it seems simple
    not having any control
    could you ever imagine what you would constitute as a masterpiece?

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    1. "Is it because we are slaves to the clock?" !!!!!! Nice

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  3. Here It Goes.
    ---
    You don't have to give me reasons why
    I don't know why I have to make that clear.
    I know I said that I wouldn't be back--
    But enough about that.
    Let me get to the story.
    It all started when we silenced it
    The fire of a gun
    we’re so far gone
    we’ll never recover
    Madness becomes sanity
    And this is our reality
    I want you
    And your ignorance
    Get it out!
    the knowledge of pain hurts.


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    1. This Rae Arrington remix was awesome! almost didnt recognize it as a remix, sort of flowed so well together, like if you taught frankenstein's creature to tap dance, rather than lumbering around. Hands clapping emoji

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    2. Aye thanks Ryan. Nice analogy *crying laughing emoji and heart with sparkles emoji*

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  4. This is all nonsense (this is the title, its confusing when it can't be italicized)



    You might skim through silence to the death,

    it tests our spirit.

    I like the fact that we don’t know,

    as naive as it sounds.

    Nothing lasts forever,

    I truly should have known.

    Silence to the death,

    is no place for the truth.

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    1. "Nothing lasts forever, I truly should have known."
      Thank you very much. *hands clapping emoji* *smiley emoji*

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  6. 24 Hours of Something More

    Many say we are slaves to the clock;
    Watchman, Tell Us of the Night.
    The clock strikes half past Green;
    The voiceless scream? Deaf to both you and me.
    In the frame, the keys locked
    Trapped under the murky water that's trapped within me.
    The clock rings green to black.
    My watch is hollowed.
    The minute hand tics,
    Looks up through the trees and sticks
    see's a reflection of his seas.
    The hour hand strikes the color blue.
    My times running out.
    I guess this is God’s voice,
    But I think we silenced it.
    This is the world
    In the palm of my hand.
    I can feel my heart beating
    A mile a minute
    And this is our reality.

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  7. It doesn’t interest me
    what you do for a living.
    I want to know of Something More.
    I want to know
    what sustains you,
    You don't have to give me reasons why
    just tell me.
    He kindly said
    The sound of Heartbeat
    Before we stomped it

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  8. It's all too easy to give up when your world seems unstable.

    What is morality?
    You never truly know.
    I seek your answers.
    Many think it is theirs to control.
    Does it come from within?
    I think we silenced it.
    How can this world be so mean?
    I can't speak to you.
    And where does fate come in to this equation?
    always stuck in my head.
    What we tell ourselves matters.
    I do have a desire to explore
    in this current moment.
    Only in spontaneity can we be who we truly are.
    we’re so far gone.
    This is the world:
    humans are fragile,
    We're all damaged
    but that's alright.
    the ones we love never really leave us.
    I am not there
    I did not die.
    C'est La Vie

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  9. Rebirth

    My tree house is on fire
    And for some reason I smell gas on my hands.
    Many say we are slaves to the clock,
    pushed around like a feather in the wind.
    a snake eating its own tail.
    I guess this is God’s voice,

    lies feeding lies.
    Control the uncontrollable,
    my thoughts and actions aren't my own--
    a puppet to one's instincts and urges.
    In 30 seconds we all take 8 breaths.

    Say the universe predestined,
    is this scene so serene?
    Trusting your creativity,
    The rage of the riot.

    I guess this is God’s voice
    But I think we silenced it

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  10. As We Wait In Sleep


    How can this world
    be so mean?
    Is it because it is Society’s
    self-preservation method?

    Is it because the blood
    runs dry,
    the bloodshed has no limit?
    For these bones silence.
    to the Death.

    Is it because this,
    Is our Reality?
    would you call it,
    The Death of Peace?

    Is it because,
    we are Always
    wanting something better.
    This is our Reality.

    How can this World
    be so mean?

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  11. Odd As It Seems

    I found eternal refuge
    a timeless trait
    a reassuring feeling
    withstands the test of time.

    A universal truth
    acts as a pocket,
    wrapped in the universal language.

    You start filling in the lines you don't know,
    would it have significance?
    You probably know nothing.

    Are we taught
    to fit humanities emotion
    to control others.

    Take away from the complexity.

    To what extent
    are we taught
    to speak out randomly
    to be cherished
    to live unbelievable memories.

    I ruled out
    my biggest dream.
    Is that sick and twisted? I hope not.

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  12. HUMAN NATURE

    many say we are slaves to the clock,
    somewhere in those handed-down 24 hours
    the hour hand strikes the color blue

    i’m about to admit something i’ve never admitted in my life
    whisper it under my breath
    i know i will always be wanting something,
    every day i make mistakes.

    tell us of the night.
    let me get back to the story.

    i don’t think it’s fair to tell someone they are easily angered.
    you are constantly getting stuck in your head,
    come and go through my mind but never stay long

    time tests.
    it tests our body.
    one does not have control.

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    1. yo so like that first stanza was killer! and the second... third, fourth... and fifth.
















      it was good.

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  13. nothing's ever enough

    It tests our spirit.
    It tests our body.
    It tests our mental capacity.
    as humans we seek attention and social acceptence
    so we build these "friends" to fill that roll

    I too go for a swim in my mind quite often.
    I am completely content in my mind,
    Something about the way your body falls asleep but your mind continues to stay awake,
    I don't believe in ghosts.
    I believe that demons are real
    I'm not even a swimmer

    when I am down in my lowest of lows,
    I would have awful night terrors.
    I am alone and I have no one to talk to
    so i have no one to hurt me.

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    1. I feel special that you used my words, and in such a great cannibaliatic poem. Yay!

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  14. Neglecting Each Others Feelings

    Between the roars of your whispered breaths, straining for peace,
    he saw how bad I was trying to breathe.
    how do you know this realm of thinking?
    how do you know we have full control of our destiny?

    I don't think people understand how precious a breath is.
    I have questioned darkness so deep you can feel all its weight.
    how do you know
    if you were to create,
    or if you think it’s crazy?

    talk about anything?
    falsified stories from her youth pulling me under.
    tell everyone why i can't breathe,
    How did this make you feel?

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  15. I Believe In… The Voice

    Many say we are slaves to the clock,
    One Chance, One Person, One Hour
    Watchman, Tell Us of the Night
    "I'm too busy, I don't have time for that!"
    Is it because we are always wanting something better?
    something different?
    “Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?”
    What makes something a beautiful disaster?
    "Now life has killed
    The dream I dreamed"
    Is it a legacy or a residue?
    How Would We Break Down?
    What If I Wore Your Scars...?
    What If You Were Me; What If I Were You.

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  16. You Have an Interesting Way of Seeing Things
    ----
    Many say we are slaves of the clock.
    A mile a minute.
    And this world is a crime scene
    No blanket could cover.
    Why do you think that is?
    To be great is to be misunderstood.
    Don’t get me wrong, I could be misleading.
    Time tests.
    It tests our spirit.
    It tests our body.
    We do not honor it.
    This is not how I thought my song would go,
    but I can still dance.

    You have an interesting way of seeing things.

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    1. EVEN WHEN YOU DON'T USE YOUR OWN WORDS THEY'RE STILL AMAZING.

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  17. Fade Out.

    I used to feel so empty,
    One day after another
    trying to fill my life with
    the meaning of existence,
    vast expanses of space,
    light that would fail to wait for you.

    Drawn to the light,
    She told him “Be strong and
    As we fade out of my imagination,
    This situation's becoming real,
    and though it's
    becoming my light,
    a lifetime of relief,
    in the essence of being helpless,
    Is it the same for you?"

    Where is this hope coming from?
    is it almost a cry out for help?
    break apart your soul
    and cry for some sort of sympathy.

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  18. This is the world
    In the palm of my hand
    I never get tired of hearing the passion in someone's voice.
    But only so an hour
    And there the sun burns crimson bright
    risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body
    I guess this is God’s voice,
    I can give grace for anything
    Traveling the world
    I’m glad you didn’t die
    I climbed the tree to see the world
    Drawn to the light in the distance
    The night was all you had
    I will be there if it all crumbles down
    Take the heart from my chest

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  19. Obsessed with a Few Lines, Love the Piece as a Whole

    Have you ever seen a masterpiece before
    Hard to explain really
    It isn’t the time frame in which you tell the story,
    but the story itself.

    Driving in your car
    the objects around you blur together,
    and when you don’t stop and realize your surroundings
    you leave out precious moments
    and miss beautiful sights
    that are rarely seen again.

    I think it could be so interesting
    all in all, amazing piece of work.
    The reassuring feeling of when you die,
    knowing your favorite poem not fully over.

    I wish that people’s actions went noticed.
    I wish that I could share all the things I found beautiful.
    I know that I am important.

    People say about you should stay true
    and not worry about impressing others.
    Don’t let other people draw your parameters
    what you would constitute as a “Masterpiece”

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    1. This is rad as heck but the title just takes it a step further into awesomeness.

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  20. Masterpiece

    We are slaves
    Under the millions of miles of sea
    What would you call it
    Everyone day dreams from time to time
    And we’re so far gone
    There is no place for the truth
    Expose all these heart aneurysms
    The bloodshed has no limit
    Diminish the diversity of the world
    A beautiful spectrum
    The dreaded struggle
    The hues stripped

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  21. The world is very set in reminding everyone of the bad things that people do

    as humans we seek attention and social acceptence

    We humans we strive for perfection

    We hunger for freedom

    Going about life unnoticed.
    likely to be unseen.

    You cannot deny beauty,

    This is where

    IM playing the trick on my brain

    you can see how the brain is capable of making

    I look around me seeing all these monsters under their "human" flesh

    it becomes much more realistic after that

    You say be loving to others
    there is so much art out there and we will never know the full story

    Forever, tormenting threats are left to rot in my brain.

    Quietly whispering in my ear to shut up and obey.

    I am not alive.

    The monster controls me

    Not that anyone else can see them, though

    How I wish you were alive

    You didn’t get to choose your death.

    If you find me, let me know

    tell my shadow it is not alone


    This can’t be how it ends

    Wasted in ignorance

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    1. THIS IS INCREDIBLE. I love how you found the lines that go together so well. It really makes me see how connected some of our posts can be.

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    2. Please copy/past your comment in my new one. I had to change the title so I deleted the comment.

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  24. "Taking The Words Out Of My Own Mouth"
    By The Niz

    That does not give you the right.

    But the right is given to me from myself.

    I’m going to do anything if it means I’m gonna win.

    Yet, I don’t always win.

    Stop acting like a child and grow up.

    But I’m still maturing.

    Showcases of the immortals.

    But I’m not immortal; I’m only human.

    Get it out of my head.

    I enjoying the suffering more than anyone should.

    Examples and back stories make up responses.

    Responses from the humans living among me.

    I have so many questions

    And I have so many answers.

    That’s what we call poetry.

    But isn’t poetry it’s own language?

    And I don’t have the patience to learn another language.

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  25. A Story in 5 Minutes or Less

    There is no set definition,
    I hope you listen.
    The sound of Heartbeat
    Before we stomped it.

    Some of you might skim through
    to say you listened to it.
    This is the sound of the Earth.
    Silence to the death of peace.

    Get it out of my head!
    I climbed a tree to see the world.
    No need to be ashamed.
    Break the social norms.

    I’m not trying to be rude at all,
    But I’m just honestly curious.
    And it’s not that bad;
    It’s still not just my style.

    What kind of twisted satisfaction does this give you?
    To be great is to be misunderstood.

    So I just finished this piece,
    And I must say:
    With these notes,
    These words,
    You are no longer alone.

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    1. Hey! Someone else also used my own titles! This is great Poetic Work. Nice job on it. I don't know what the meaning of it is, but I'm enjoying not knowing!

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  26. An Eternity of Dreams

    Many say we are slaves to the clock
    You're in perpetual darkness.
    Darkness so deep you can feel its weight
    But enough about that
    So, here it goes
    Stop acting like a child and grow up
    this change is only temporary
    Constant day dreaming
    You think insanity’s bad
    But we’ve all tried it
    We all have our own path in life.
    Many think it is their's to control
    Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?
    The moon trades with the sun,
    energetic blues and greens
    zig zag before my eyes
    Lately I've been spending a lot of time wondering what it is that I idolize about the people
    what moment made you realize that they will never let you down?

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  27. Does it come from within
    sense of hope, motivation, or happiness
    lets us escape
    dreams remain only figments of our imagination
    Reminding myself what is important
    to recognize and value my life
    it can comfort me
    and make me happy

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  28. What are you Feeling

    This already dead world,
    it is a cynical place--
    all I can do is condemn it
    We as a society have stooped
    to a level of being so vain.
    I want to have a conversation.
    I am the color grey
    You will see the dimensions it holds,
    the memories that belong to it.
    Creativity is more like a fire,
    maybe we'll never have the final piece…
    but, you could always add more.
    I look out beyond tracing the road
    I see this:
    my experiences alone.
    I don't feel bad in anyway,
    for the selfish world I have envisioned.
    We control the destination.
    No offence, and I mean this with all due respect.
    I appreciate you
    I’m glad you didn’t die.

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  30. Snow day

    A light rose dancing in spring.
    Those beautiful marshmallows roll in,
    How can the sky be so blue?

    With a grin drawn on her dark face,
    The moon winked beyond.
    This is the sound of the Earth.

    Every 30 seconds you take 8 breaths
    Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?

    Can you begin a new life in a new body?
    Continue with the idea if you haven't already,
    Open your heart, mind, body, and soul!

    I step out of my time machine
    This is just a temporary hell, not a permanent one:
    A beautiful disaster.

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  31. the Serpents became nourished


    I can feel my heart beating
    It acts like it knows me
    tell my shadow it is not alone


    I want to feel your pain
    Continuously living my death.

    I can still feel his hands on me,
    Quietly whispering in my ear to shut up and obey.
    I can't speak to you.
    Not like this.

    I would like to think
    The monster controls me
    "No longer do I believe

    this is a temporary fling.

    It probably worried some

    I’m grown.
    I still climb a tree every now-and-again.

    My eyes may lose sight of him

    but my heart will never forget
    Who was there to catch me

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  32. This is the world:

    Madness becomes sanity.
    So define to me insane?
    Are we daringly driven by the truth we simply do not accept?

    Madness becomes sanity,
    this is our reality.

    Our world simply does not accept the spoken truth
    Only because society isn’t ready.
    Chaos
    Riots
    Clinically insane

    Is this our normal?

    If madness becomes sanity,
    Are we all insane?

    And if so, are the mad drivens our sane?

    Our reality is nothing but one big
    Insane existence.


    BV

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  33. Time In Your Hands

    We are an hourglass
    Slowly losing sand.
    Not because we’ve aged
    And not because you’ve changed.

    No we were told, we could
    Withstand the test of time,
    Yet I still find sand in your pockets
    Saving the hours for yourself.

    We are divided by the dust
    That lingers on these sheets
    As the hands on the clock wrinkle,
    And the seconds that pass, stab my back

    They say that only time can heal,
    But I still feel and won’t forgive
    As I have lived to set you free,
    But you always come back to me
    Even after all those years.

    You still glare at your watch
    When you want to leave,
    Yet I believe that you add more sand
    To the glass that
    You emptied long ago.

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  34. All these things we accept as natural because they’re
    for the most part
    universal
    This world is a crime scene.
    There is no place for the truth.

    If all languages converged into one,
    it loses its beauty
    impacting their self-concept
    without obscene oppression.
    Every military strategy wouldn't be a secret.
    that sounds sadistic.


    Opinions are difficult to work with.
    rooted deep into our intellectual thinking,
    I still regret it.

    To get what's needed out,
    they thought there was an injustice being done.
    Some more than others
    causing anyone undue pain.
    it is terrifying
    the fear of the number 13
    But I think we silenced it

    Just make animal noises while maintaining as much eye contact as humanly possible.
    I kind of wanted them to start whipping at the end.

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  35. A Battle Between Two Great Forces

    Just because we think it's weird
    Does not mean it is wrong.
    One universal language is
    More powerful than you think.

    Functioned under a single language
    The complexity of Earth
    Loses its beauty
    Whether you win or lose.

    This is how we survive:
    Unity in diversity
    To be great is to be misunderstood

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  36. Before you read this poem wanna say thanks to all the people for the words that I have gathered from my minutes of research cx please enjoy i feel like its good.

    Let me tell you a story
    Growing up, I tried to take the world around me from an objective position,
    Delve into the perilous world of my personal life.
    Have seen the memories of family members and loved ones completely deteriorate.
    Does it matter whether what you are remembering is the factual truth?

    Get it out! Get it out!
    Your ignorance is bliss
    Because it reflects you
    Would this affect people?

    This is God’s voice
    This is the world,
    Share with me your thoughts
    Me tell a story

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  37. We are slaves to the clock
    Because somewhere in those handed-down 24 hours
    You contemplated something more.
    Is this our normal?
    Madness becomes sanity
    Silence, the death of peace
    We do no honor it
    For silence is the sound of Earth
    Before we conquered it

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  38. Tell Us of the Night

    The moon winked
    changing and growing apart from you
    An ocean so wide, but you’re just in the other room.
    I would have awful night terrors
    Because the knowledge of pain hurts
    And your ignorance is bliss
    I guess this is God’s voice
    A load of self-saving straight-laced tongue-in-cheek
    Final moments on this earth
    Beauty can begin a new
    The voiceless scream? Deaf to both you and me
    Has never been described before
    What you perceive to be the truth
    Revealed the soul underneath
    We are slaves
    To the clock
    A higher power
    Could you ever imagine
    The solemn night
    Caressing me with all its colors
    How many have gone to touch infinity?
    Many say Watchman, Tell Us of the Night
    Watchman, Tell Us of the Night

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