Eating Poetry
Ink runs from the corners of my mouth.
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
The librarian does not believe what she sees.
Her eyes are sad
and she walks with her hands in her dress.
The poems are gone.
The light is dim.
The dogs are on the basement stairs and coming up.
Their eyeballs roll,
their blond legs burn like brush.
The poor librarian begins to stamp her feet and weep.
She does not understand.
When I get on my knees and lick her hand,
she screams.
I am a new man.
I snarl at her and bark.
I romp with joy in the bookish dark.
Cannibalize this blog. Cannibalize the words, verses and prose. Cut them up, eat them, and
make them your own. Make new from the old, original born from originality.
Your assignment is to scour the blog, dissecting PHRASES (3+ words) from ANY post
(South OR Central), response, or reply, and assemble them in an aesthetic way to create a
new poem. Write the poem in a word document, save the document, and then copy/paste
your cannibalized poem below.
Happy eating.
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ReplyDeleteyo, so like i got this. Im thinking about another, you know? i added some question marks (shoot me, i know) but thats why i was thinking about a V2. Peace out and re elect Bill Clinton
ReplyDelete-Ryan
What would you constitute as a masterpiece?
A magnificent rainbow?
A tropical beach?
A beautiful sunset?
The world around us?
Does it come from within?
Is It real?
Something better? Something different?
everyone daydreams time to time
is it because we are slaves to the clock?
i would love to break the barrier
to do something
it seems simple
not having any control
could you ever imagine what you would constitute as a masterpiece?
"Is it because we are slaves to the clock?" !!!!!! Nice
DeleteHere It Goes.
ReplyDelete---
You don't have to give me reasons why
I don't know why I have to make that clear.
I know I said that I wouldn't be back--
But enough about that.
Let me get to the story.
It all started when we silenced it
The fire of a gun
we’re so far gone
we’ll never recover
Madness becomes sanity
And this is our reality
I want you
And your ignorance
Get it out!
the knowledge of pain hurts.
This Rae Arrington remix was awesome! almost didnt recognize it as a remix, sort of flowed so well together, like if you taught frankenstein's creature to tap dance, rather than lumbering around. Hands clapping emoji
DeleteAye thanks Ryan. Nice analogy *crying laughing emoji and heart with sparkles emoji*
DeleteThis is all nonsense (this is the title, its confusing when it can't be italicized)
ReplyDeleteYou might skim through silence to the death,
it tests our spirit.
I like the fact that we don’t know,
as naive as it sounds.
Nothing lasts forever,
I truly should have known.
Silence to the death,
is no place for the truth.
"Nothing lasts forever, I truly should have known."
DeleteThank you very much. *hands clapping emoji* *smiley emoji*
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ReplyDelete24 Hours of Something More
ReplyDeleteMany say we are slaves to the clock;
Watchman, Tell Us of the Night.
The clock strikes half past Green;
The voiceless scream? Deaf to both you and me.
In the frame, the keys locked
Trapped under the murky water that's trapped within me.
The clock rings green to black.
My watch is hollowed.
The minute hand tics,
Looks up through the trees and sticks
see's a reflection of his seas.
The hour hand strikes the color blue.
My times running out.
I guess this is God’s voice,
But I think we silenced it.
This is the world
In the palm of my hand.
I can feel my heart beating
A mile a minute
And this is our reality.
It doesn’t interest me
ReplyDeletewhat you do for a living.
I want to know of Something More.
I want to know
what sustains you,
You don't have to give me reasons why
just tell me.
He kindly said
The sound of Heartbeat
Before we stomped it
It's all too easy to give up when your world seems unstable.
ReplyDeleteWhat is morality?
You never truly know.
I seek your answers.
Many think it is theirs to control.
Does it come from within?
I think we silenced it.
How can this world be so mean?
I can't speak to you.
And where does fate come in to this equation?
always stuck in my head.
What we tell ourselves matters.
I do have a desire to explore
in this current moment.
Only in spontaneity can we be who we truly are.
we’re so far gone.
This is the world:
humans are fragile,
We're all damaged
but that's alright.
the ones we love never really leave us.
I am not there
I did not die.
C'est La Vie
Rebirth
ReplyDeleteMy tree house is on fire
And for some reason I smell gas on my hands.
Many say we are slaves to the clock,
pushed around like a feather in the wind.
a snake eating its own tail.
I guess this is God’s voice,
lies feeding lies.
Control the uncontrollable,
my thoughts and actions aren't my own--
a puppet to one's instincts and urges.
In 30 seconds we all take 8 breaths.
Say the universe predestined,
is this scene so serene?
Trusting your creativity,
The rage of the riot.
I guess this is God’s voice
But I think we silenced it
As We Wait In Sleep
ReplyDeleteHow can this world
be so mean?
Is it because it is Society’s
self-preservation method?
Is it because the blood
runs dry,
the bloodshed has no limit?
For these bones silence.
to the Death.
Is it because this,
Is our Reality?
would you call it,
The Death of Peace?
Is it because,
we are Always
wanting something better.
This is our Reality.
How can this World
be so mean?
Odd As It Seems
ReplyDeleteI found eternal refuge
a timeless trait
a reassuring feeling
withstands the test of time.
A universal truth
acts as a pocket,
wrapped in the universal language.
You start filling in the lines you don't know,
would it have significance?
You probably know nothing.
Are we taught
to fit humanities emotion
to control others.
Take away from the complexity.
To what extent
are we taught
to speak out randomly
to be cherished
to live unbelievable memories.
I ruled out
my biggest dream.
Is that sick and twisted? I hope not.
HUMAN NATURE
ReplyDeletemany say we are slaves to the clock,
somewhere in those handed-down 24 hours
the hour hand strikes the color blue
i’m about to admit something i’ve never admitted in my life
whisper it under my breath
i know i will always be wanting something,
every day i make mistakes.
tell us of the night.
let me get back to the story.
i don’t think it’s fair to tell someone they are easily angered.
you are constantly getting stuck in your head,
come and go through my mind but never stay long
time tests.
it tests our body.
one does not have control.
yo so like that first stanza was killer! and the second... third, fourth... and fifth.
Deleteit was good.
ReplyDeletenothing's ever enough
It tests our spirit.
It tests our body.
It tests our mental capacity.
as humans we seek attention and social acceptence
so we build these "friends" to fill that roll
I too go for a swim in my mind quite often.
I am completely content in my mind,
Something about the way your body falls asleep but your mind continues to stay awake,
I don't believe in ghosts.
I believe that demons are real
I'm not even a swimmer
when I am down in my lowest of lows,
I would have awful night terrors.
I am alone and I have no one to talk to
so i have no one to hurt me.
I feel special that you used my words, and in such a great cannibaliatic poem. Yay!
DeleteCannibslistic*
DeleteNeglecting Each Others Feelings
ReplyDeleteBetween the roars of your whispered breaths, straining for peace,
he saw how bad I was trying to breathe.
how do you know this realm of thinking?
how do you know we have full control of our destiny?
I don't think people understand how precious a breath is.
I have questioned darkness so deep you can feel all its weight.
how do you know
if you were to create,
or if you think it’s crazy?
talk about anything?
falsified stories from her youth pulling me under.
tell everyone why i can't breathe,
How did this make you feel?
I Believe In… The Voice
ReplyDeleteMany say we are slaves to the clock,
One Chance, One Person, One Hour
Watchman, Tell Us of the Night
"I'm too busy, I don't have time for that!"
Is it because we are always wanting something better?
something different?
“Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?”
What makes something a beautiful disaster?
"Now life has killed
The dream I dreamed"
Is it a legacy or a residue?
How Would We Break Down?
What If I Wore Your Scars...?
What If You Were Me; What If I Were You.
your poem is a killer and I am now dead
DeleteYou Have an Interesting Way of Seeing Things
ReplyDelete----
Many say we are slaves of the clock.
A mile a minute.
And this world is a crime scene
No blanket could cover.
Why do you think that is?
To be great is to be misunderstood.
Don’t get me wrong, I could be misleading.
Time tests.
It tests our spirit.
It tests our body.
We do not honor it.
This is not how I thought my song would go,
but I can still dance.
You have an interesting way of seeing things.
EVEN WHEN YOU DON'T USE YOUR OWN WORDS THEY'RE STILL AMAZING.
DeleteFade Out.
ReplyDeleteI used to feel so empty,
One day after another
trying to fill my life with
the meaning of existence,
vast expanses of space,
light that would fail to wait for you.
Drawn to the light,
She told him “Be strong and
As we fade out of my imagination,
This situation's becoming real,
and though it's
becoming my light,
a lifetime of relief,
in the essence of being helpless,
Is it the same for you?"
Where is this hope coming from?
is it almost a cry out for help?
break apart your soul
and cry for some sort of sympathy.
A+++++ maddie
Delete:)
This is the world
ReplyDeleteIn the palm of my hand
I never get tired of hearing the passion in someone's voice.
But only so an hour
And there the sun burns crimson bright
risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body
I guess this is God’s voice,
I can give grace for anything
Traveling the world
I’m glad you didn’t die
I climbed the tree to see the world
Drawn to the light in the distance
The night was all you had
I will be there if it all crumbles down
Take the heart from my chest
.....falafel.....
ReplyDeleteObsessed with a Few Lines, Love the Piece as a Whole
ReplyDeleteHave you ever seen a masterpiece before
Hard to explain really
It isn’t the time frame in which you tell the story,
but the story itself.
Driving in your car
the objects around you blur together,
and when you don’t stop and realize your surroundings
you leave out precious moments
and miss beautiful sights
that are rarely seen again.
I think it could be so interesting
all in all, amazing piece of work.
The reassuring feeling of when you die,
knowing your favorite poem not fully over.
I wish that people’s actions went noticed.
I wish that I could share all the things I found beautiful.
I know that I am important.
People say about you should stay true
and not worry about impressing others.
Don’t let other people draw your parameters
what you would constitute as a “Masterpiece”
I lOvE LoVe LOVE YOUR TITLE!
DeleteThis is rad as heck but the title just takes it a step further into awesomeness.
DeleteMasterpiece
ReplyDeleteWe are slaves
Under the millions of miles of sea
What would you call it
Everyone day dreams from time to time
And we’re so far gone
There is no place for the truth
Expose all these heart aneurysms
The bloodshed has no limit
Diminish the diversity of the world
A beautiful spectrum
The dreaded struggle
The hues stripped
ReplyDeleteThe world is very set in reminding everyone of the bad things that people do
as humans we seek attention and social acceptence
We humans we strive for perfection
We hunger for freedom
Going about life unnoticed.
likely to be unseen.
You cannot deny beauty,
This is where
IM playing the trick on my brain
you can see how the brain is capable of making
I look around me seeing all these monsters under their "human" flesh
it becomes much more realistic after that
You say be loving to others
there is so much art out there and we will never know the full story
Forever, tormenting threats are left to rot in my brain.
Quietly whispering in my ear to shut up and obey.
I am not alive.
The monster controls me
Not that anyone else can see them, though
How I wish you were alive
You didn’t get to choose your death.
If you find me, let me know
tell my shadow it is not alone
This can’t be how it ends
Wasted in ignorance
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ReplyDeleteTHIS IS INCREDIBLE. I love how you found the lines that go together so well. It really makes me see how connected some of our posts can be.
DeletePlease copy/past your comment in my new one. I had to change the title so I deleted the comment.
Delete"Taking The Words Out Of My Own Mouth"
ReplyDeleteBy The Niz
That does not give you the right.
But the right is given to me from myself.
I’m going to do anything if it means I’m gonna win.
Yet, I don’t always win.
Stop acting like a child and grow up.
But I’m still maturing.
Showcases of the immortals.
But I’m not immortal; I’m only human.
Get it out of my head.
I enjoying the suffering more than anyone should.
Examples and back stories make up responses.
Responses from the humans living among me.
I have so many questions
And I have so many answers.
That’s what we call poetry.
But isn’t poetry it’s own language?
And I don’t have the patience to learn another language.
A Story in 5 Minutes or Less
ReplyDeleteThere is no set definition,
I hope you listen.
The sound of Heartbeat
Before we stomped it.
Some of you might skim through
to say you listened to it.
This is the sound of the Earth.
Silence to the death of peace.
Get it out of my head!
I climbed a tree to see the world.
No need to be ashamed.
Break the social norms.
I’m not trying to be rude at all,
But I’m just honestly curious.
And it’s not that bad;
It’s still not just my style.
What kind of twisted satisfaction does this give you?
To be great is to be misunderstood.
So I just finished this piece,
And I must say:
With these notes,
These words,
You are no longer alone.
Hey! Someone else also used my own titles! This is great Poetic Work. Nice job on it. I don't know what the meaning of it is, but I'm enjoying not knowing!
Delete
ReplyDeleteAn Eternity of Dreams
Many say we are slaves to the clock
You're in perpetual darkness.
Darkness so deep you can feel its weight
But enough about that
So, here it goes
Stop acting like a child and grow up
this change is only temporary
Constant day dreaming
You think insanity’s bad
But we’ve all tried it
We all have our own path in life.
Many think it is their's to control
Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?
The moon trades with the sun,
energetic blues and greens
zig zag before my eyes
Lately I've been spending a lot of time wondering what it is that I idolize about the people
what moment made you realize that they will never let you down?
ReplyDeleteDoes it come from within
sense of hope, motivation, or happiness
lets us escape
dreams remain only figments of our imagination
Reminding myself what is important
to recognize and value my life
it can comfort me
and make me happy
What are you Feeling
ReplyDeleteThis already dead world,
it is a cynical place--
all I can do is condemn it
We as a society have stooped
to a level of being so vain.
I want to have a conversation.
I am the color grey
You will see the dimensions it holds,
the memories that belong to it.
Creativity is more like a fire,
maybe we'll never have the final piece…
but, you could always add more.
I look out beyond tracing the road
I see this:
my experiences alone.
I don't feel bad in anyway,
for the selfish world I have envisioned.
We control the destination.
No offence, and I mean this with all due respect.
I appreciate you
I’m glad you didn’t die.
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ReplyDeleteSnow day
ReplyDeleteA light rose dancing in spring.
Those beautiful marshmallows roll in,
How can the sky be so blue?
With a grin drawn on her dark face,
The moon winked beyond.
This is the sound of the Earth.
Every 30 seconds you take 8 breaths
Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?
Can you begin a new life in a new body?
Continue with the idea if you haven't already,
Open your heart, mind, body, and soul!
I step out of my time machine
This is just a temporary hell, not a permanent one:
A beautiful disaster.
the Serpents became nourished
ReplyDeleteI can feel my heart beating
It acts like it knows me
tell my shadow it is not alone
I want to feel your pain
Continuously living my death.
I can still feel his hands on me,
Quietly whispering in my ear to shut up and obey.
I can't speak to you.
Not like this.
I would like to think
The monster controls me
"No longer do I believe
this is a temporary fling.
It probably worried some
I’m grown.
I still climb a tree every now-and-again.
My eyes may lose sight of him
but my heart will never forget
Who was there to catch me
This is the world:
ReplyDeleteMadness becomes sanity.
So define to me insane?
Are we daringly driven by the truth we simply do not accept?
Madness becomes sanity,
this is our reality.
Our world simply does not accept the spoken truth
Only because society isn’t ready.
Chaos
Riots
Clinically insane
Is this our normal?
If madness becomes sanity,
Are we all insane?
And if so, are the mad drivens our sane?
Our reality is nothing but one big
Insane existence.
BV
Time In Your Hands
ReplyDeleteWe are an hourglass
Slowly losing sand.
Not because we’ve aged
And not because you’ve changed.
No we were told, we could
Withstand the test of time,
Yet I still find sand in your pockets
Saving the hours for yourself.
We are divided by the dust
That lingers on these sheets
As the hands on the clock wrinkle,
And the seconds that pass, stab my back
They say that only time can heal,
But I still feel and won’t forgive
As I have lived to set you free,
But you always come back to me
Even after all those years.
You still glare at your watch
When you want to leave,
Yet I believe that you add more sand
To the glass that
You emptied long ago.
ReplyDeleteAll these things we accept as natural because they’re
for the most part
universal
This world is a crime scene.
There is no place for the truth.
If all languages converged into one,
it loses its beauty
impacting their self-concept
without obscene oppression.
Every military strategy wouldn't be a secret.
that sounds sadistic.
Opinions are difficult to work with.
rooted deep into our intellectual thinking,
I still regret it.
To get what's needed out,
they thought there was an injustice being done.
Some more than others
causing anyone undue pain.
it is terrifying
the fear of the number 13
But I think we silenced it
Just make animal noises while maintaining as much eye contact as humanly possible.
I kind of wanted them to start whipping at the end.
A Battle Between Two Great Forces
ReplyDeleteJust because we think it's weird
Does not mean it is wrong.
One universal language is
More powerful than you think.
Functioned under a single language
The complexity of Earth
Loses its beauty
Whether you win or lose.
This is how we survive:
Unity in diversity
To be great is to be misunderstood
Before you read this poem wanna say thanks to all the people for the words that I have gathered from my minutes of research cx please enjoy i feel like its good.
ReplyDeleteLet me tell you a story
Growing up, I tried to take the world around me from an objective position,
Delve into the perilous world of my personal life.
Have seen the memories of family members and loved ones completely deteriorate.
Does it matter whether what you are remembering is the factual truth?
Get it out! Get it out!
Your ignorance is bliss
Because it reflects you
Would this affect people?
This is God’s voice
This is the world,
Share with me your thoughts
Me tell a story
We are slaves to the clock
ReplyDeleteBecause somewhere in those handed-down 24 hours
You contemplated something more.
Is this our normal?
Madness becomes sanity
Silence, the death of peace
We do no honor it
For silence is the sound of Earth
Before we conquered it
Tell Us of the Night
ReplyDeleteThe moon winked
changing and growing apart from you
An ocean so wide, but you’re just in the other room.
I would have awful night terrors
Because the knowledge of pain hurts
And your ignorance is bliss
I guess this is God’s voice
A load of self-saving straight-laced tongue-in-cheek
Final moments on this earth
Beauty can begin a new
The voiceless scream? Deaf to both you and me
Has never been described before
What you perceive to be the truth
Revealed the soul underneath
We are slaves
To the clock
A higher power
Could you ever imagine
The solemn night
Caressing me with all its colors
How many have gone to touch infinity?
Many say Watchman, Tell Us of the Night
Watchman, Tell Us of the Night