Thursday, April 10, 2014

Cannibalistic Poetry

Write a poem from the cannibalized lines of past posts.

Do not put your lines in quotes. We all know that these lines are not your own, but your own arrangement.

Do what you can to retain the integrity of the original line.

Look back and cannibalize for the sake of art.

Chomp…chomp…nnnommm…nnnommmm…nnnnnommmmmm

22 comments:

  1. Upon Someone else



    Life is not always black and white

    but rather shades of gray.

    Restrictions from society

    Tell us it's in our minds.

    It's only an illusion.

    That everything is the same.

    Soon you'll find that

    every voice

    was always inside of

    you.

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  2. I drop down, but I don't--can't-- fall
    Don't worry,
    When we have each other, we have everything.
    I know it's lonely, and life seems hard,
    I swear on every cat in the universe,
    We are worth us.
    The truth, it never changes.
    We are who we want to be.
    This is the future.
    Hands out incase we fall,
    and we fall.
    Fall in love.

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  4. Life is not always black and white or right or wrong
    There are a lot of grays or maybes
    We enjoy the rawness of the emotion and it makes us feel real
    We want to feel something, anything
    Why do humans crave pain?
    If only you could understand. 
    It is like a parasite.

    I know it's lonely and life seems hard
    They know you're hurting.

    We need the pain
    Please, remember that.

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  5. I ran the world, I used to.
    You tremble like you see a ghost,
    Bittersweet memories,
    that is all I'm taking with me.
    And I believe that the darkness
reminds us,
    where light can be.
    Don't you know it doesn't have to be so hard?
    
Waiting for everyone else around to agree,
    might take too long.
    So give me hope in the darkness that I will see the light.
    Don't forget to remember me,
    Because everything is changing,
    and there is nothing I can do.
    I could use a fresh beginning too,
    all of my regrets are nothing new.
    My mother nearly cried when I told her that I had wanted to go.
    You made me, and I love you, but I can't change the things I've done.
    I'm love's suicide.

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  6. If I were given an immortality potion? No, my would not change.
    Is it really worth it to kill someone to save another?
    I completely agree with you.
    could you explain that?

    Sometimes you need a friend that has more strength than you.

    It's me against the world.
    i need other people in my life to validate my existence but i want to be left alone
    I want to believe in the magic around us,
    but can’t as the world around me have disproved all and any fantasy.

    I need to escape.
    I Want To Be Needed.
    it makes us feel real.

    is Living worth the pain?

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  7. If you have found something that you were looking for then why would you wish to not have found it?
    maybe when you found it, it wasn't what you were hoping for.
    Should we fear the unknown?
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    Eyes open,
    Seeing blindly.
    You see a pencil, but I see the translator to the words I can not say.
    The smile you showed,
    
Now I know it was fake.

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  8. Then once upon a dream never came true
    You won't be missing that part of me
    Is it just enough for you to breathe?
    beautiful world we live in
    i want to see the northern lights
    A freedom from myself and all my burdens.
    I'm who I am and always will be.
    I wish for a freedom from all anxiety
    Your eyes are older than the tallest tree you've seen.




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  9. No one can stop me from being me.

    I drop down, but I don't--can't-- fall

    I'll prove them wrong... I'll show them all
    I'll achieve my full potential no matter what

    Following my dream without having a backup plan,
    Living fearlessly despite other's attempts to stop me.
    Staying true to myself, without restriction from society,
    To become someone, I am proud to be.

    How can you be hopeful when the world is hopeless?

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  10. My hunger is growing stronger
    My painted eyes go on staring
    I feel like like no one uses me
    anymore

    I used to be a source of joy
    I am ricocheting through the air
    to a certain doom; feeling so guilty
    it hurts

    I wish for a freedom from all anxiety
    To become someone I am proud to be

    they know you're hurting.

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  11. Hey,
    Hey you, Yeah you.
    Dear, Stranger
    Dear stranger looking for happiness
    Dear Blank
    Dear who ever reads this
    whom it may concern
    Dear Whoever,
    Whoever would like to feel better,
    Dear you'll know who you are if you read it,


    Dear Crazy somebody,
    Dear girl who believes she is ugly not good enough,
    Dear heartache,
    To those with the same secret,
    To an open mind,
    To the person in need of assistance
    To the person who just needs someone to be there for them,
    To the broken hearted,
    Dear Broken, Shattered, Fallen, you.

    You are not alone.

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  12. A freedom
    from myself and all my burdens.
    staying true, without restriction from society.
    losing beauty.
    surrounded by a sea of shadows...
    I walked faster avoiding
    a thousand years;
    I see the creature that lies there.

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  13. Dear you'll know who you are when read it,
    Silence scares me
    My body is coughing up a storm
    I am looking for the answers, I've only found more questions
    If you have found something you were looking for, then why would you wish to not have found it?
    I am ricocheting through the air
    Are you afraid of falling? Or are you afraid of what happens when you hit the ground?
    For you a while you may struggle with yourself
    Keep your chin up darling
    You just have to find the right words and melody
    Sincerely, your best friend

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  14. The perfect ratio of
    A long hike in the fall and
    The smell of home
    Early mornings
    Late nights
    A memory that reminds me of who I am
    The perfect song to get me though the day

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  15. Are you happy with where you are going in life?
    Im struggling, falling.
    If you have found something that you were looking for then why would you wish to not have found it?

    Sometimes to stay alive, you've got to kill your mind

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  16. Untitled Titles
    By: Haley Renison

    Describe your senses
    the little things
    worth a thousand words.

    Leave nothing to regret
    because fear is only what you allow it to be,
    and this question and answer vault contains
    the mirror to humanity.

    Modern motivation
    has become life tennis,
    where the pain of midnight
    leaves seasonal residue
    as beauty in the eyes of the beholder.

    The moral newtonian compass
    points to one chance, one person, one hour,
    and the voices
    of cannibalistic poetry
    create a communal story,
    a communal poem
    a love letter
    of a new perspective.

    The random post of perspectives
    demands a new you—resolution.

    A whole new world
    a Tuesday challenge…

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    2. This is honestly amazing did you use every title?

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  17. The mirror to humanity
    Restrictions from society
    The truth; it never changes
    How can you be hopeful when the world is hopeless?

    Disapproving all and any fantasy
    Of the bursts of raw emotion
    But isn't it worth the pain
    If it makes us feel real?

    Broken shattered fallen
    Dreams that don't come true
    Just you against the world
    Praying for escape
    Fearing the unknown

    Is it really worth it
    Killing one for the sake of another?
    In looking for answers you just find more questions

    Freedom
    Loosening it's beauty
    But that was all an illusion to begin with
    The gray area.........
    Sometimes you have to loose your mind
    To survive

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