Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Love isn't always easy

She lies in bed wondering why she had fallen for him. She lies there wondering if she had made the right choice.If he was the right one,if he really cared. He said to her that he loves her.  But when he said it it didn't sound like it was true. Her heart says yes but her mind says no. If he really loved her he would of called her.So now she lays her in bed time seems to drag but it is midnight.
Then her phone rings it's him dose she pick it up or let it ring her mind is racing she lets it ring it seems like it was an internity before her phone rang again. 
She picks it up he says I'm sorry I'm just calling to tell you to say I love you.
This time his voice is different he is sincere . She says I love you too. They say goodnight and I love you. She lies in bed knowing why she had fallen for him and that she had made the right choice.
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  1. UnknownJanuary 27, 2016 at 11:33 AM

    Ive felt this type of anxiety before. Where little things seem off but the easiest way to feel better is with something that seems sincere.

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  3. alymgueJanuary 27, 2016 at 12:53 PM

    While I have never been in this situation, I think this was very well written. I enjoy how it touched on the need for reassurance with self doubt.

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  4. UnknownJanuary 27, 2016 at 5:22 PM

    Love is never easy and so many people have these fear. The doubts, the questions all of it. Sometimes these are what break relationships and sometimes they strengthen them. I like this piece because it conveys a complicated situation in a simple and relatable way

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    1. UnknownJanuary 30, 2016 at 9:36 PM

      I agree to this, even though this hasn't happened to me before being the first one to say I love you is hard. It takes time to build up that love and one may feel that love before the other does. So at first they may just say it so they won't hurt the others feeling but then one day they will really mean the "I love you" back

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  5. UnknownJanuary 28, 2016 at 5:04 AM

    While i for one doubt and second guess everything, this was a really well put piece and it was really great.

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  6. AddalynJanuary 28, 2016 at 5:31 AM

    I love this. I can so relate to everything.

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  7. UnknownJanuary 28, 2016 at 11:17 AM

    I really like this I can relate to this in a way.

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  10. UnknownJanuary 28, 2016 at 11:38 AM

    I can deeply relate to these feelings. I had a very hard time getting over someone. It took a lot of self-convincing.

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  11. UnknownJanuary 29, 2016 at 2:49 PM

    It is never worth working yourself over something or somebody, but it is something that everybody continues to do.

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  12. UnknownJanuary 29, 2016 at 9:23 PM

    Though not everyone realizes it, many girls do sit up at night just thinking about their crush and whether they are going to call or not.

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  13. UnknownJanuary 31, 2016 at 9:11 AM

    I like the truth in the title because love isn't always easy. Love is hard it is something you have to work hard for. True love isn't a fairy tale and that is okay. True love is when something is hard but you fight for it because that one person is worth it.

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  14. UnknownJanuary 31, 2016 at 3:56 PM

    This was so cute! It is also really relatable

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