Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Tuesday Challenge...

Our time together is slowly coming to an end. In the spirit of finish lines, here is your challenge:

Pen the best line of writing that you've written this semester, and don't stop until your satisfied.

27 comments:

  1. Sometimes the end is just a beginning.

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  2. In time,
    I've learned to put
    Ribs before bibs, and
    Figured that after
    I've swallowed my dinner,
    I need to finish it off with some
    finger food.
    And that is the worst lesson of all.

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  3. Sometimes I just want to stop caring, but if I do, I lose this pointless survival game called life.

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  4. Tomorrow I'll wake with the sun

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  5. Reality is only a contorted version of a fantasy,
    Sipping away from what is supposed to be real,
    Lapsing into my dream, where everything is whole,
    And I am no longer shattered.

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  6. Even when you became the oxygen that filled my lungs
    and I was merely the dust under your fingernails,
    I never knew loved you…
    until you started to talk in your sleep
    because sometimes you’d say my name.

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  7. Forgetting the past is like telling yourself to stop dreaming about the future.

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    1. i really like this. It say so much in a very big way.

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  8. following the dreams you want is not something that can be taken for granted. If you wish to pursue your love then you must work for it. If you are willing to work for what you want then and only then will you be happy with what you have after you receive it

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  9. I find that the longer I shovel, the more the dirt piles up on the sides leaving me here to dig my own grave.

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    1. Woah... This is epic. Short but awesome!

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  10. (Why in the world did you have to remind me, Torres, that my CW2 experience will be ending soon??)

    These shadows are murderers to everything once light,
    and this lack of light is strangling the life of the fight.
    Even the might of day cannot stop this night.

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  11. If I haven't gotten better by now then I probably never will. If I have then this is not the end it is the beginning of a whole new writing journey. And I'm not alone.

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  12. The darkness is taking over, and I'm finding it harder and harder to find my light.

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  13. It starts to seem like a dream within a dream, when life starts to become infatuated and you realize the truth are now lies and lies are still lies.

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  14. Breaking a mirror turned into a broken me, among the shattered pieces was a girl with dreams bigger than her hopes, but I took the pain and turned it into happiness that let me fulfill who I truly was and who I always wished to be.

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  15. I enjoy the last line the most, but can only be said with everything else there first.
    "That sounds great and all
    But is that
    Who I truly am?

    Yes, it is.
    Let’s keep it this way.
    No need to Re-START."

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  16. From which one may never return from their internal slumber, until one can touch the stars below our feet.

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    1. Nice imagery, "until one can touch the stars below our feet."

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  17. Some time I wish I could stop the world. Just so I can Catch up to you and hold you, but you are growing to fast and I can not stop you. I can only help you through it all. Everything you do in your life will make you who you are and will help you grow more as a person. If only you let me help you, you wouldn't be in here sad and only.

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  18. Till even your thoughts betray you
    And the whole world fades away
    How come I deserve tomorrow
    When you don't even get today

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